Derby #125: Birds
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Red Baron

Red Baron
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BlindShooter


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Hopefully this resub works eh?

Father Dodo gathered his kids around for a tale
-We Dodos can't fly but this is the story of a lucky Dodo who knew a dog that knew how to fly.
-Dogs don't fly either - replied a youngling
-This one did.
-But they don't.
-Shush, don't be an ugly duck and let me tell my story.

prozakgal


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Ok It's cute, but...this is a birds derby. Save it for the future. Or at least put some birds in the background. Or make it Snoopy with a Woodstock...Something to fit the theme.

prozakgal


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prozakgal wrote:Ok It's cute, but...this is a birds derby. Save it for the future. Or at least put some birds in the background. Or make it Snoopy with a Woodstock...Something to fit the theme.


oh nvm... it's a dodo huh?? That dodo looks like a dog... srsly...

bluetuba


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This is exactly the same as the rejected one. A resub generally means you have changed the entry to fix the reason it was rejected.

Resubmitting the exact same thing will just get you rejected again. Unless it's a kitty in a pumpkin, then you can make it orange instead of black and you'll be fine.

"You can't just dress a Minion like Spock, and add a caption that says "Logical Me". There's a prison for people like that. Below my house."

xazothia


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bluetuba wrote:This is exactly the same as the rejected one. A resub generally means you have changed the entry to fix the reason it was rejected.

Resubmitting the exact same thing will just get you rejected again. Unless it's a kitty in a pumpkin, then you can make it orange instead of black and you'll be fine.


The rejected one had Snoopy's feet in it. This one does not.

bethlehemstarr


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bluetuba wrote:This is exactly the same as the rejected one. A resub generally means you have changed the entry to fix the reason it was rejected.

Resubmitting the exact same thing will just get you rejected again. Unless it's a kitty in a pumpkin, then you can make it orange instead of black and you'll be fine.


Rejected because: This is great execution. The addition of the Beagle's feet makes this seem like a parody and I don't see the commentary. I'd resubmit without the reference to a popular comic icon.


So I think that the resub dealt with the issue.

bluetuba


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bethlehemstarr wrote:So I think that the resub dealt with the issue.


Ah ok, I didn't see it until after it was rejected and didn't notice the snoopy feet waaay at the bottom under the REJECTED stamp sorta. I was comparing the two images and must not have had it scrolled down all the way, so they literally looked identical. heh

Bravo then, I hope the dodo takes off.. ;)

"You can't just dress a Minion like Spock, and add a caption that says "Logical Me". There's a prison for people like that. Below my house."

TheyKilledKenny


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Actually... it looks better without the feet... GMV

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walmazan


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Much much better! and still I love it!

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j0naht


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Go Red Barron!! I can't believe this was rejected earlier for the dog feet. GMV!

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