Derby #158: Physics
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Defying Gravity

Defying Gravity
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Squanderdalfast


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Re: Defying Gravity


I fear there are too many colors and I doubt you want it to be framed in a black box. Those quibbles aside, I'd like to see an explanation.

akumaokami


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Squanderdalfast wrote:I fear there are too many colors and I doubt you want it to be framed in a black box. Those quibbles aside, I'd like to see an explanation.


First, I would like to thank you for your criticism, it is very helpful to me. This has six colours in it (white, black, red, green, blue and skin tone), it's just that since this is my first time entering something into the derby, I had no clue about the print-ready file until I was about to submit it and by separating the colours, it sort of screwed up the flow and definition of them. I also forgot to get rid of the black box in the design.
Once again this is my first entry ever, so of you have any advise for me, I would more than thankful.

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