Derby #173: Build Your Own Robot
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Locked and Loaded

Locked and Loaded
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odysseyroc


quality posts: 30 Private Messages odysseyroc
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Collaboration with Midgerock. His line art reminded me of old school sci-fi comics, so I thought it would be fun to finish this with my version of a Moebius color scheme.





midgerock


quality posts: 6 Private Messages midgerock
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you did an amazing job on the colors oddeseyroc! You rock when it comes to colors!

chumpmagic


quality posts: 9 Private Messages chumpmagic
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Wow. You two should team up more often. This looks great!


be10der2me


quality posts: 0 Private Messages be10der2me
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Both of you guys are fantastic artists in your own rite. Together you are awesome! Wish I could vote 1000 times for this one!

kevlar51


quality posts: 36 Private Messages kevlar51

Nice work Team Roc/k!

This really came together nicely!

paigeg


quality posts: 7 Private Messages paigeg
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YEESSSSSSS! The greatest thing since Drakxxx/CrescentDebris! Wow, Od your colors and use of light always kill me. And, midge's old-school comic style slays. Together - Scoooooore!
I want. Big-time.

fishbiscuit5


quality posts: 27 Private Messages fishbiscuit5
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Awesome collab! I hope we get to see more subs like this from you guys in the future.

midgerock


quality posts: 6 Private Messages midgerock
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Thanks guys for the support.
I think Od-roc did a fantastic job coloring.
I wonder if we would get the opportunity to do another design in the future. I'd be open to it. Od-roc has tons of experience in the industry which I would love to learn.
Too bad more people aren't diggin' the design this week.

megsck


quality posts: 6 Private Messages megsck
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im liking this team up! nice job you two! =)

carmelpixie


quality posts: 0 Private Messages carmelpixie
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I love the design and coloring. I don't know about other people but I don't really care for the choice of shirt color. The image itself is wonderful, but I think it looks a bit weird on asphalt. +1 anyways though because as I said, the image is wonderful. :D

chunkydesign


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If you ever plan on reworking this design, and don´t mind my suggestion, please change the skull. To me, it just seems something that it doesn´t fit with the rest. The type of lines are different, more "sketchy", and it has no shading, like it was "glued" after the illustration was finished.

midgerock


quality posts: 6 Private Messages midgerock
chunkydesign wrote:If you ever plan on reworking this design, and don´t mind my suggestion, please change the skull. To me, it just seems something that it doesn´t fit with the rest. The type of lines are different, more "sketchy", and it has no shading, like it was "glued" after the illustration was finished.


I actually did rework it and resubbed it yesterday. Let me know what you think of that one. I think the reason it appears different is because the black lines of the skull are removed to make it appear in the glass dome.

chunkydesign


quality posts: 0 Private Messages chunkydesign
midgerock wrote:I actually did rework it and resubbed it yesterday. Let me know what you think of that one. I think the reason it appears different is because the black lines of the skull are removed to make it appear in the glass dome.


Because of the color it doesn´t stand out so much, but I still think it should have thinner, more stylized lines to match the comics style of the illustration.

no1


quality posts: 7 Private Messages no1
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i prefer this design to the redone one.

if i may be so rude, altho i am not a professional, i would like to suggest a change in colours. perhaps change the hot pink to a deeper or pure red, optic yellow a deeper yellow, green metal to grayish blue or possibly gunmetal blue. change the shirt colour to black and extend the glow out a bit to give the characters' legs a little silhouette.


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midgerock


quality posts: 6 Private Messages midgerock
no1 wrote:i prefer this design to the redone one.

if i may be so rude, altho i am not a professional, i would like to suggest a change in colours. perhaps change the hot pink to a deeper or pure red, optic yellow a deeper yellow, green metal to grayish blue or possibly gunmetal blue. change the shirt colour to black and extend the glow out a bit to give the characters' legs a little silhouette.


some great feedback but alas I wish we could resub with Od-roc recoloring. He did a great job but he has a number of prior commitments.

no1


quality posts: 7 Private Messages no1
midgerock wrote:some great feedback but alas I wish we could resub with Od-roc recoloring. He did a great job but he has a number of prior commitments.


except for the glow, could you do some of the recoloring yourself, so that he wouldn't have to do much with it? just have od-roc send you the print ready, substitute the colours without changing any of the shapes, send back to him for glowy stuff or other minor edits.


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midgerock


quality posts: 6 Private Messages midgerock
no1 wrote:except for the glow, could you do some of the recoloring yourself, so that he wouldn't have to do much with it? just have od-roc send you the print ready, substitute the colours without changing any of the shapes, send back to him for glowy stuff or other minor edits.


I wish it was that easy.
He's really swamped to even do that little tweak.
Sorry.

tjost


quality posts: 24 Private Messages tjost
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Good piece and collab guys. I think I agree with what others ahve said though. If you could keep the basic coloring but maybe change out the tones on the green and pink and then put the skull in from your second one it would rock! +1

kaseyfleming


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tjost wrote:Good piece and collab guys. I think I agree with what others ahve said though. If you could keep the basic coloring but maybe change out the tones on the green and pink and then put the skull in from your second one it would rock! +1


In the pre-derby thread I thought this was awesome. Looks really good now with some color! kudos!

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