Derby #180: Complementary Colors
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Worth two...in the savanna?

Worth two...in the savanna?
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penichillin


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My first derby submission. Critiques welcome. Please help me get better.

uniique


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Welcome to the derby, penichillin!
I wouldn't mind a closer look at the design, maybe zoom in on the art & add a small tee presentation on the side. Good work tho!

kellyann214


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this is quite clever. My only suggestion is that you put it on a different color. the green draws my eyes away from the design.
and i would like a closer view at the design itself, just for future reference.

penichillin


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Thanks for the comments! Hopefully I'll be able to make time to keep submitting designs. Seems like a good way to stretch and learn as a designer.

Mavyn


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I like it...but what happened to his tail?

My speech is not parsing. I am speaking in ellipsis.

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