Derby #186: Oddball
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Tee Martoonis

Tee Martoonis
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paigeg


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Re: Tee Martoonis


If you could tighten up the composition a bit, bring the elements more together, and add some background, this would kill. At least, I would wear it.
Time for a dirty martooni.

veevandyke


quality posts: 2 Private Messages veevandyke
paigeg wrote:If you could tighten up the composition a bit, bring the elements more together, and add some background, this would kill. At least, I would wear it.
Time for a dirty martooni.


Thanks. I could tighten it up a bit, and I played around with various backgrounds before deciding that it looked better plain. I'm interested in your insight, though, as to what type of background you'd like to see.... I may resubmit if it's something I can do.

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