Derby #193: Catchy Slogans for Everyday Products
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That'll Be The Day

That'll Be The Day
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mrd37


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This is my first derby submission so please comment but do be kind. I got tired of seeing bacon everywhere and I thought I would put a new twist on the conventional 'product'.

Four colors on royal blue.

vorteks


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Nice! Well drawn, and funny. GMV.

If I was going to suggest an improvement I'd suggest coloring or shading the man a bit more. I know he's not the focus of the illustration, but he seems... ghostly? I don't know, just my $0.02.

mrd37


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vorteks wrote:Nice! Well drawn, and funny. GMV.

If I was going to suggest an improvement I'd suggest coloring or shading the man a bit more. I know he's not the focus of the illustration, but he seems... ghostly? I don't know, just my $0.02.


Thanks for your suggestions. I agree that more shading would be good. It was getting late last night and I really wanted to finish, haha.

sogj


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If you drew this in illustrator, try experimenting with brush styles, too. It looks like you used the default brush which may or may not artistically lend the best look to the design. Good first entry!!!!!

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Pheline


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I like it from a distance but don't like the piggies all dead. Sorry. I buy most of these for my kids.

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