Nothing spectacular, mind you, but you have captured the essence of the derby and I will applaud that. Appluase.
The rendition is simple. line work is grand, but ...the faces lack imaginality. Nothing special. Make each face a person. Give it life. Micro expression is th key2 story-telling. This is a good story, with great lines. Make them real... but funny. This is funny. You dig?
Derby #194: Science Fair
Science and Cooking, The Pefect Combo
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- Apr 11, 2011 3:03 AM
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