I like the superhero tandem idea but the text is boring. Try stylizing the text a bit and make the whole thing feel more like a single graphic instead of a drawing with a caption.
Mystery Meat and Secret Sauce
- Jun 5, 2011 11:36 PM
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or even without text would work.
i don't really care for the title anyway, it's the illustration that stands out.
- Jun 6, 2011 2:41 AM
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I agree with the others...the drawing is amazing, but the text is boring and bland...I'd either lose the text or stylize it. Make a logo out of it, or turn it into a full-on comic book cover parody