Derby #209: Fairy Tales
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The Buried Moon

The Buried Moon
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lilygrapetree


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This is based on an old simple fairytale, whereupon the moon gets trapped in the marshes with wicked bogies.

This is my first attempt at designing, so any criticism (constructive please) and or comments most welcome. (I know I will have done some PONY-up in my submission too, so feel free with the pointers please!)

Anyways....Thanks, and I hope it's not the worst.... :o)

lilygrapetree


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No sympathy votes either!!

blinddog3d


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lilygrapetree wrote:No sympathy votes either!!


you won't get any from this group.

Nice drawing. You may want to post larger images (details so we can see it). Can't really tell what is is because it's very small. Good luck.
BlindDog3D

bluejester


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It's a neat idea, but I feel like the moon needs more detail on his face. However, I like the work you did on the witch hands holding the book.

zerobriant


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it's fun to see a hidden message on the design :D



dedl0ck


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I liked the colors you used for both the design and the shirt color. And they go well together. I like the idea of the hands holding open a book, but I don't think I would've understood the concept without the title. One thing I've been working on is trying to make concepts clearer so when someones out and about, a person can see it, and be able to get the original idea straight off. I've recently been reading the discussion blogs and I've seen some people post there their sketches of their ideas, and the group communicates which one they like best. I'm planning on doing it from now on, and if you're new I think you'll benefit from it too. Good luck!

snakexyz


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That thumbnail had me scared!

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