ChaosDoctor07
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Re: Blue Ring Love

A blue-ringed octopus shirt!? My pre-Derby prayers have been answered. Good stuff, indeed. Just have a few suggestions:
1) Might just be me, but the head seems just a little bit off on the top portion of the octopus (that is, the part that is coming from the left side to the back).
2) Those jellyfish look rather phallic, to the point of being pretty noticeable. Once you see it (look at the "head" of the jellyfish, you won't be able to unsee it.
That being said, once again, very good job, particularly as your first shot at this kind of thing. I am also particularly pleased that you tied in the "Australia" bit of the theme, rather than just an octopus itself. I highly look forward to seeing any future work you submit to future Derbies.
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missmelis
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Re: Blue Ring Love

This is great, anemality! The shading and placement are terrific - it looks like you've been doing this for years!
But of course...
ChaosDoctor07 wrote: 2) Those jellyfish look rather phallic, to the point of being pretty noticeable. Once you see it (look at the "head" of the jellyfish), you won't be able to unsee it.
... now I can't unsee it. Damyew, ChaosDoctor07! *shakes fist crankily*
However, overall the design is really visually appealing. Nice job!
The goodness of the true pun is in the direct ratio of its intolerability. - Edgar Allan Poe
Alas, poor shirt.woot. I knew it well...