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Redbeard's Institute of Piratry, Est. 1512

Redbeard's Institute of Piratry, Est. 1512
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omarfeliciano


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Mavyn


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Re: Redbeard's Institute of Piratry, Est. 1512


I like the hatching, but am not a fan of the grey shirt. It would look much better on something warmer--the brown, perhaps?

My speech is not parsing. I am speaking in ellipsis.

nathanshields


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Mavyn wrote:I like the hatching, but am not a fan of the grey shirt. It would look much better on something warmer--the brown, perhaps?

You might be right. I thought about it, but didn't want to overdose the brown.

paigeg


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Re: Redbeard's Institute of Piratry, Est. 1512


I'm not a fan of the white lettering - looks too much 'laid over' the sign. It doesn't really fit with the rest of the texturing.

Hamstur


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Re: Redbeard's Institute of Piratry, Est. 1512


I like the design, but not the colors. I think the white is too hot for the other colors, and the brown doesn't work on the gray shirt. I'd say bring the white text down, and match the color to the shirt - I like gray so I'd say bring the graphic down into the gray hues, but you should probably just choose a better shirt color.

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