Derby #249: Astronomy
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Swing on a Star

Swing on a Star
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usopp


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Re: Swing on a Star

you have this bold, graphic, simple star, and then you have this detailed woman swinging from it. the 2 styles are clashing together and look awkward. I'd make something else simple swinging from the star. something simple and cute. I really like the star, and the concept. i want this shirt to work.

toby8915


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usopp wrote:you have this bold, graphic, simple star, and then you have this detailed woman swinging from it. the 2 styles are clashing together and look awkward. I'd make something else simple swinging from the star. something simple and cute. I really like the star, and the concept. i want this shirt to work.


Yeah, I wasn't happy with the result either, I will probably reuse it, but more of a cartoony girl next time.

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