Derby #270: Propaganda...FOR SCIENCE!
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The Resistance

The Resistance
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Spiritgreen


quality posts: 225 Private Messages Spiritgreen
Re: The Resistance



Robots, rise up! (роботы восстанут!)

Join the electrical resistance.


See a big version here.

This is four colors on red, thanks for looking,
---Spiritgreen Ω

harantula


quality posts: 3 Private Messages harantula
Re: The Resistance


Love the colours!






jessicar64


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Spiritgreen wrote:Robots, rise up! (роботы восстанут!)


Except, the text says роботы восстснут! which isn't exactly pronounceable (or translatable.)

You might want to fix the mis-spelling before you start to get too many votes.

Spiritgreen


quality posts: 225 Private Messages Spiritgreen

jessicar64, thanks for the suggestion but it's not a C it's a stylized lower-case a, see the little vertical line on the top right compared to the actual Cs'. :^)

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Thanks Harantula! Tried to go for an unconventional palette on this one.

hannahzinn


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[quote postid="5183600" user="Spiritgreen"]jessicar64, thanks for the suggestion but it's not a C it's a stylized lower-case a, see the little vertical line on the top right compared to the actual Cs'. :^)

Spiritgreen, I understand your decision and defense of it, but I have to say as someone who lived in Russia for 4 years and reads Russian, my response was the same. I started to read your text (was excited about it actually) and then quit when it didn't look like a real word. I think the issue may be that most if not all of your other letters except for the r in robot are capitalized (or at least look the same lower and upper) so a stylized lowercase "a" just looks like a c for those of us in the know.

Although I like your design, I wouldn't buy it for that one tiny little reason. Again, I am only of many but I wanted to second the comment in case you wanted to reconsider early in the game. That being said, I wish you all the best with your design retouched or not.

Spiritgreen


quality posts: 225 Private Messages Spiritgreen

Thanks hannah, when I just sent in the printready file I closed off the right side of that 'a'. Tiny change, literally just a few pixels, but it would read more clearly.

hannahzinn


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Spiritgreen wrote:Thanks hannah, when I just sent in the printready file I closed off the right side of that 'a'. Tiny change, literally just a few pixels, but it would read more clearly.


The text looks good. I'm glad it was an easy fix. +1 for me.

lonelypond


quality posts: 461 Private Messages lonelypond
Re: The Resistance


nice

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Spiritgreen


quality posts: 225 Private Messages Spiritgreen
Re: The Resistance


Thanks lonelypond!

Btw, the binary on the electric factory is the ascii code for escape.

uinforet


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Looks awesome.

wirdou


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you make difficult things look so easy! awesome palette, great design :D

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