Derby #274: Monsters, Robots, and Aliens!
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Fos Naratu!

Fos Naratu!
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writermist


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I loved the preview because it was elegant but the funny shadow kinda throws it off. I feel the two should not be together.

chachachino


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writermist wrote:I loved the preview because it was elegant but the funny shadow kinda throws it off. I feel the two should not be together.


Thanks WM! I appreciate the feedback. You may be right. I definitely saw one before the other. I dunno. I always saw vampires as beings with a dual nature, with a secret. Maybe not always elegant versus insane, but usually suave handsome charming versus old crusty undead bloodthirsty. I'll definitely consider criteria in future designs, how the tone of different elements fit together. Thanks!

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