Derby #289: Literary Classics
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Parting is Such Sweet Sorrow

Parting is Such Sweet Sorrow
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fishbiscuit5


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Inspired by Romeo and Juliet.

beware1984


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Haha this is genius.

j5


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I would like this better without the word "poison" because the bottle is obvious enough.
Of course, that would mess up the visual balance you have, prompting a bit of a redesign.

move along

fishbiscuit5


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j5 wrote:I would like this better without the word "poison" because the bottle is obvious enough.
Of course, that would mess up the visual balance you have, prompting a bit of a redesign.


I had actually thought about taking out "poison" but you're right, the layout and balance is all messed up without it. I'll play around with it and see if I can come up with an alternate idea. Thanks for the feedback, J5!

neuropsychosocial


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j5 wrote:I would like this better without the word "poison" because the bottle is obvious enough.

I agree with j5... Also, my reading comprehension of addenda to Derby rules is apparently quite limited.

RIP A.A. Blanks (Obituary)

fishbiscuit5


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neuropsychosocial wrote:I agree with j5... Also, "you must title your design with the book you're referencing."


Travis said in the pre-derby thread that as long as the title is in the comments or if the reference is painfully obvious it doesn't have to be in the title. I did use a Romeo and Juliet quote for the title!

neuropsychosocial


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Re: Parting is Such Sweet Sorrow

You're completely right and I apologize; I'm sure I read that post, but I didn't internalize it. I was actually grateful for the original rule because I tend to miss references and I was looking forward to having them spelled out for me, so I remembered having that thought but forgot about the clarification!

Thanks for correcting me (and doing so quickly). I think I've edited my previous comments so that the only person confused will be me!

(Again, apologies!)

RIP A.A. Blanks (Obituary)

fishbiscuit5


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neuropsychosocial wrote:You're completely right and I apologize; I'm sure I read that post, but I didn't internalize it. I was actually grateful for the original rule because I tend to miss references and I was looking forward to having them spelled out for me, so I remembered having that thought but forgot about the clarification!

Thanks for correcting me (and doing so quickly). I think I've edited my previous comments so that the only person confused will be me!

(Again, apologies!)


No worries and no need to apologize! :D

deborah11565


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Good job Fishbiscuit ! Knocking on the fogs door ! GMV

flattopfrank


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In the Fog.. AWESOME!!

fishbiscuit5


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deborah11565 wrote:Good job Fishbiscuit ! Knocking on the fogs door ! GMV


Thanks for the vote! :D

fishbiscuit5


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flattopfrank wrote:In the Fog.. AWESOME!!


Hooray!

fuacka


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I've never liked the type based designs but I have to admit that you have a cool-personal style, and a clever sense of humor!
Great one!

fishbiscuit5


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fuacka wrote:I've never liked the type based designs but I have to admit that you have a cool-personal style, and a clever sense of humor!
Great one!


Thanks! I love words on my shirt so I usally end up designing something I really want to wear. :D

fuacka


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fishbiscuit5 wrote:Thanks! I love words on my shirt so I usally end up designing something I really want to wear. :D


And you do it highly great.
Proof of it are your designs on the top 20.
:D

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