Derby #292: Time Travel
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Time Loop

Time Loop
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msj11


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A paradox of perpetual motion! Clever!

Thirdbase9


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The text should say, "Because I went back in time I am stuck in a time loop." or perhaps "I am stuck in a time loop because I went back in time."

I don't know.

blackbirdps3


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Patrick's got the Midas touch.

orhplus


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Clever idea and a well done ejecution!

thewronggrape


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Thirdbase9 wrote:The text should say, "Because I went back in time I am stuck in a time loop." or perhaps "I am stuck in a time loop because I went back in time."


I agree. I was trying to read the text as-is and it didn't quite have the cleverness of your suggestions.

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