Derby #300: What Makes Me Different
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Legend of Nine Lives

Legend of Nine Lives
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thehookshot


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Re: Legend of Nine Lives


Hey everyone - looking for an honest answer. Besides the use of cats once again, is there any issues with this design/style. Things that can be enhanced? Finding it surprising it only has 5 votes and really want to improve in the future. Any feedback is really helpful from the community!!

Mavyn


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thehookshot wrote:
Legend of Nine Lives

Hey everyone - looking for an honest answer. Besides the use of cats once again, is there any issues with this design/style. Things that can be enhanced? Finding it surprising it only has 5 votes and really want to improve in the future. Any feedback is really helpful from the community!!


For me, this isn't something I'd wear. It's not 'tee shirt' design, so much as a design on the topic that's been put on a tee. The flow would be awkward on my shape, and it would require more attention from an onlooker to 'get it'.

The title of '9 lives' and only 4 images is incongruous and makes me fidget.

My speech is not parsing. I am speaking in ellipsis.

thehookshot


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Mavyn wrote:For me, this isn't something I'd wear. It's not 'tee shirt' design, so much as a design on the topic that's been put on a tee. The flow would be awkward on my shape, and it would require more attention from an onlooker to 'get it'.

The title of '9 lives' and only 4 images is incongruous and makes me fidget.


Thanks Mavyn, good feedback and something I can take with me back to the design room. Cheers!

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