Derby #332: Evolution
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A Revolution in Evolution

A Revolution in Evolution
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jessisima


quality posts: 7 Private Messages jessisima
Re: A Revolution in Evolution


In case you can't read all the text, it says:

Don't wait on nature!
New! Radioactive Waste
Use on your friends, your turtles, even yourself!*
A revolution in evolution!
*results may vary

Thanks to OakenSpirit and ApeLad for the input during the work in progress!

oakenspirit


quality posts: 87 Private Messages oakenspirit
Re: A Revolution in Evolution


So that's the secret of the ooze!
+1

jessisima


quality posts: 7 Private Messages jessisima
oakenspirit wrote:So that's the secret of the ooze!
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SHHH! its a secret... but yes

phoenix4159


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Re: A Revolution in Evolution

I'm voting for this because it's really clever, but honestly I'd be a lot more likely to buy it if it said "Don't wait for nature!"

I'm not one of those people who goes around correcting others' grammar, but I'm not going to wear something on my chest that makes me cringe every time I see it.

Narfcake


quality posts: 289 Private Messages Narfcake
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The caption and fine print is a great selling point. GMV.

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