Derby #37: Greed
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Predator vs. predator

Predator vs. predator
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netshark


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I like it a lot, I just don't see how it relates to greed, and am afraid it might get rejected. Its not like the frog can bite the spider in half and share with the other one.

tiaerman


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This design would be perfect I think without the smaller frog and whatever that is behind it... I can't really tell what is going on there but I really liked the design I saw in the forums with just the bigger frog eyeing the fly...

There are 10 types of people: those who know binary, and those who don't.

arsenicsauce


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tiaerman wrote:This design would be perfect I think without the smaller frog and whatever that is behind it... I can't really tell what is going on there but I really liked the design I saw in the forums with just the bigger frog eyeing the fly...


TBH I felt like there was too much empty space in the composition and was trying to work other things into it to balance things out a little. In my own mind there's a definite story there, but I'm still learning how to get that kind of story into a single t-shirt design so that, you know. other people actually get it.

Netshark, thanks and I was going for a kind of biting-off-more-than-you-can-chew thing, which is greed to me, and something I see in a couple other designs around the contest too. If it gets rejected by the woot mods I won't be devastated though.

fablefire


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Looks like he ate an umbrella, which, would actually be a smidge funnier. Love your frog style though.

netshark


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arsenicsauce wrote:TBH I felt like there was too much empty space in the composition and was trying to work other things into it to balance things out a little. In my own mind there's a definite story there, but I'm still learning how to get that kind of story into a single t-shirt design so that, you know. other people actually get it.

Netshark, thanks and I was going for a kind of biting-off-more-than-you-can-chew thing, which is greed to me, and something I see in a couple other designs around the contest too. If it gets rejected by the woot mods I won't be devastated though.


Ah ok I get it now. Rather than going for the easy fly, the frog went for the spider. Hopefully it should be fine.

2thFairy


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Wow! I almost passed right by this because I couldn't figure out the thumbnail. Now that I have studied the total comp, I really like it. Nice design...

cyphr9


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I love the expression. it's like "hmm...maybe I could fit the fly in too..."

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