Derby #39: Motion
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Speed Graph

Speed Graph
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dekonstruct


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Hopefully the graph looks like motion enough to convey that they are moving and that they are also a graph...

sailstud25


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dekonstruct wrote:Hopefully the graph looks like motion enough to convey that they are moving and that they are also a graph...


I dig it, but the graph bars are too fat IMHO... looks too much graph and not enough speed lines of motion. Also makes the design too big for me. Perhaps squeeze the design down to more of a strip across the chest with the characters overlapping and the graph bar consists of 3 or 4 lines rather than the solid bar.

Just my analysis and humble opinion. Awesome idea though; the ears/antennae are funny!

Hmm, just went in for 3 Randoms, when I haven't bought any shirts lately (although still checking frequently) so what are the chances of liking them!?! Oh well, couldn't pass up the mystery!
...a number of shirts on teetrade.com

dekonstruct


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sailstud25 wrote:I dig it, but the graph bars are too fat IMHO... looks too much graph and not enough speed lines of motion. Also makes the design too big for me. Perhaps squeeze the design down to more of a strip across the chest with the characters overlapping and the graph bar consists of 3 or 4 lines rather than the solid bar.

Just my analysis and humble opinion. Awesome idea though; the ears/antennae are funny!


Thanks sailstud25, gonna have to mull that one over.

rabbitjr


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Re: Speed Graph


voted for the bunny. Despite the color ;)

wettoad


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Re: Speed Graph


love the design but not wild about the color

arem


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dekonstruct wrote:Hopefully the graph looks like motion enough to convey that they are moving and that they are also a graph...


May I suggest changing them from bunnies to people and putting them in slightly more dynamic poses?

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