Derby #63: Art as Text
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Strangers with Candy Version 2 (Resub)

Strangers with Candy Version 2 (Resub)
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klswoot


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Based on several great comments regarding my earlier entry, I decided to try revising the "C" and the "T" and to keep the letters in "With" and in "Candy" together on separate lines.

Thank you for your vote!

momtamc


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I like this version better because of it's legibility. The characters are really creative, too!

Wonderbunny


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Yeah! I like it. The great little monster for the Y is the best.

klswoot


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Wonderbunny wrote:Yeah! I like it. The great little monster for the Y is the best.


Thanks WB. I appreciated your comments on the other one and thought I'd try making a couple revisions based on your (and RachelA's) suggestions.

jahrpm


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My wife was saying she thought this way would look better...oh and how much she loved this so...GOV!!

enin


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i like your style, k
it's evident from the thumbnail

nice work!

rachel1aaron


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This looks Great! You've made the cutest little "strangers"! And I like that it's more readable now, I really hope it will catch up to the original. I'd still love to see these guys in a children's book! GMV - again! :o)

BootsBoots


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This one's definitely easier to read. I like the blockiness of the other one, though. Both have my vote regardless


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