Derby #88: Music
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Song Bird

Song Bird
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Shigwarm


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Nice retro feel to this. I'd wear it in a heartbeat.

marypuppe


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I miss the brown of the notes, but I'm still voting.

I'm picky, I just don't always express it

Vote on Threadless!:

skirochester


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NICE! I'm glad you made a few tweaks. came out great. the sheet music toned down a little is less distracting, but adds a nice texture to the shirt. good luck

theinfinityloop


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There you go! Nicely done.


Anthony3419


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Very unique idea. +1


Tabernack


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Like the composition for sure. Lots to look at but it doesn't feel cluttered or overly detailed. Bravo!

bstrad75


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Reminds me of Monty-Python artwork. Nice design, though.

-"No one expects the Spanish Inquisition!"

bsweber


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nice work, gmv!




heartluce


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Great style LBB, I love it!

jewelwing


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I'm digging it! What's the music in the background from?

Tanapangarap


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This is now the second olive shirt I have seen at Woot that I want to wear (the first was Deep in the Forest).

Get with The Program.

felloffthebus


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Do the notes make any song?

SydneyB


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bstrad75 wrote:Reminds me of Monty-Python artwork. *snip*


I was thinking the same exact thing!! Must be the hand :D

This is quite lovely!!

+1

rglee129


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The designs this week are actually cool and well done! Great job, and I love the subtle background.

Reawen


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Love this shirt! The change you made to the sheet music is a definite improvement!

noisdois


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The way that it's drawn, as well as the fact that there's a hand coming out of the horn (or whatever you call that thing), with a bird on his figure reminds me of monty python. I like the detail work on the bird.

databit


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Nice Tweater!

jasneko


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Nice, I like the colors you changed the notes to in the background (saw it earlier in the derby thread), the more subtle colors work well. I would buy it if the main graphic was smaller though, just too big for my tee wearing tendencies. Very nice design anyway! Maybe I would buy it for someone else;)

Vote!

snarkygal


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First thought was clip art. Second thought was it was a more mainstream version of the Coq Music shirt up for support on Cameesa by Monsieur Pimpant.

Just doesn't strike me as original. Sorry.

lunchboxbrain


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Wow! 5th place? Thanks to everyone for your support/votes! Fly, song bird, fly!

jsander4


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lunchboxbrain wrote:Wow! 5th place? Thanks to everyone for your support/votes! Fly, song bird, fly!


Great looking shirt! Lots of texture and great design!

BootsBoots


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Great texture and I like the Monty Python feel. Very strange (which I love). Nice work.


iamdeba


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I really like this design, but I wish it was not on green. Oh well, gmv anyway, good luck!

fleamarketadict


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snarkygal wrote:First thought was clip art. Second thought was it was a more mainstream version of the Coq Music shirt up for support on Cameesa by Monsieur Pimpant.

Just doesn't strike me as original. Sorry.


I agree with the clip-artish first impression. I mean, after all, if you were doing more than just placing clip-art, why wouldn't you position the bird so the "toes" actually wrap around the finger, which is the natural way a bird would stand.

An opinion should be the result of thought, not a substitute for it.

dijin


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get back into the fog!

lunchboxbrain


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dijin wrote:get back into the fog!


^Rock on dijin!

arylkin


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It reminds me a bit of some of The Imaginary Foundation's tees, but I like it.

doug75


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Nice, I would buy it...

lyssasimmons


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This shirt is awesome. Great details, darling concept. It really deserves to be in the fog!

renfrue


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Good Luck LBB!

lunchboxbrain


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renfrue wrote:Good Luck LBB!


Thanks for the support everyone!

SydneyB


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fleamarketadict wrote:I agree with the clip-artish first impression. I mean, after all, if you were doing more than just placing clip-art, why wouldn't you position the bird so the "toes" actually wrap around the finger, which is the natural way a bird would stand.


Two questions come to mind:

1. *IS* Clip art allowed at all?

2. LBB: Would you tell us if this were all original or some parts clip art?

lunchboxbrain


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SydneyB wrote:Two questions come to mind:

1. *IS* Clip art allowed at all?

2. LBB: Would you tell us if this were all original or some parts clip art?


I'll address these questions just to clarify everything. All of the elements (sheet music, bird, phonograph and hand) in this design were originally public domain images. That being said, all elements have been modified to the point where I feel 100% comfortable in saying that this design is an original work.

If you've voted for this and feel somehow duped, I understand if you want to rescind your vote. I'm not the first artist to use found images in a design and I won't be the last.

Again, I truly appreciate everyone who has voted/supported this design and I hope you'll continue to do so.

kylemittskus


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I just realized, I love this shirt. Voted.

"If drinking is bitter, change yourself to wine." -Rainer Maria Rilke

"Champagne is a very kind and friendly thing on a rainy night." -Isak Dinesen

"There are many ways to the recognition of truth; Burgundy is one of them." -Isak Dinesen

Ivyness


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If this doesn't go back into the fog, I'm going to be so flaming pissed! I might be forced to drive to Wal-mart to stab all of the Pokemon dolls with an ice pick, until I'm dragged kicking and screaming out of the store, hair disheveled in a fit of chibi rage.

Seriously, if you see it on the news....it was me.

Be the change...

lunchboxbrain


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radiomode


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omnitarian


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I really, REALLY dig this one.

lunchboxbrain


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radiomode wrote:All the best!


Thanks radio. Likewise!

SydneyB


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lunchboxbrain wrote:I'll address these questions just to clarify everything. All of the elements (sheet music, bird, phonograph and hand) in this design were originally public domain images. That being said, all elements have been modified to the point where I feel 100% comfortable in saying that this design is an original work.

If you've voted for this and feel somehow duped, I understand if you want to rescind your vote. I'm not the first artist to use found images in a design and I won't be the last.

Again, I truly appreciate everyone who has voted/supported this design and I hope you'll continue to do so.



I really still like the design and appreciate the honesty. My vote stands.

LetsGoDreaming


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I LOVE this! GMV for sure! And I'm going to see if my dad's account is able to vote because of his regular woot purchases.

I personally love how the bird is standing irregularly. It fits the style. This Shirt reminds me of To Kill A Mockingbird. It also feels very vintage, and the green color is perfect!

I agree that this shirt needs to be printed, or I might just cry.

GET INTO THE FOG!!!

lunchboxbrain


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LetsGoDreaming wrote:I LOVE this! GMV for sure! And I'm going to see if my dad's account is able to vote because of his regular woot purchases.

I personally love how the bird is standing irregularly. It fits the style. This Shirt reminds me of To Kill A Mockingbird. It also feels very vintage, and the green color is perfect!

I agree that this shirt needs to be printed, or I might just cry.

GET INTO THE FOG!!!


Right on LGD!

thatrobert


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lemonlover


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Awwwwwwwwwwwww! I'm so pissed this isn't in the Fog of War! It's the only one I would buy!!! What is wrong with people?!?!

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LemonLover

LetsGoDreaming


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lemonlover wrote:Awwwwwwwwwwwww! I'm so pissed this isn't in the Fog of War! It's the only one I would buy!!! What is wrong with people?!?!


I totally agree! The top 6 are all shirts that I wouldn't care to own. (Though, I'll buy the yellow one for a friend of mine if it's printed.)

The top shirts are such typical cutesy shirts (in my opinion) Except the treble clef one... which is cool... but still, I like this best. ]:

*cheers* F.O.G... F.O.G.... ;)

andrewms


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I LOVE THIS SHIRT...WISH I COULD GET IT! YOU SHOULD SELL THIS AND YOUR RETRO DESIGNS ON ETSY, I BET THEY WOULD SELL GREAT!

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