3 things, Griggitee:
1. Loved this SO much more over at Shirtfight this last week.
2. Just having the porpoise and grill leaves me wanting more. Surely you could do something with a moderately sized halftone mix to get more colors in there.
3. Creme with no background = not a winner. Black with no substantial background (like you have on your portfolio page) = not bad, though I don't care for random splatter either.... HOWEVER, having it for sale at MySoti does not bode well for this. I foresee a rejection from woot.