Derby #125: Birds
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Night Owl

Night Owl
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hewtab


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this is too cute, i love it

grrlmarvel


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hewtab wrote:this is too cute, i love it


Thank you! *blushes*

zenith1047


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I really like this and am voting for it, I just wish the tree bottoms weren't so sharp edged.

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grrlmarvel


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zenith1047 wrote:I really like this and am voting for it, I just wish the tree bottoms weren't so sharp edged.


I worried about that... I thought about having roots....to balance out of limbs.

Manvyi


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Yes, roots would have been even nicer.

stingray69


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This reminds me a lot of My Morning Jacket for some reason. I guess the owls, first of all, and the cartoony woods. Kinda reminds me of thismusic video.

Delusionalovely


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I wish that either the image was lower, so it'd look sort of wrap-aroundish, or that the tree bottoms weren't so sharp.
But in anycase, I love it and I'd wear it.

GMV!

tindal


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Delusionalovely wrote:I wish that either the image was lower, so it'd look sort of wrap-aroundish, or that the tree bottoms weren't so sharp.
But in anycase, I love it and I'd wear it.

GMV!


I wish I had gotten the idea of roots on the trees earlier! Thanks so much for the feedback, it helps me learn!

tjost


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tindal wrote:I wish I had gotten the idea of roots on the trees earlier! Thanks so much for the feedback, it helps me learn!


I would resub this to like DBH or threadless, somewhere that can do oversized off the shirt prints and have maybe one large tree coming up and the little owls a little bigger and on different branches. I think that would pop nicely, save you from doing roots, which I think would detract, and give you a really nice shirt!

prozakgal


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Man I love this one. I really want it... I want to wear it with everything I own...

sguthrie12


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I like this. I like it a lot. I want to wear it now.

TheyKilledKenny


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tindal wrote:I wish I had gotten the idea of roots on the trees earlier! Thanks so much for the feedback, it helps me learn!


The roots would help give the tree a greater sense of height... GMV

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grrlmarvel


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tjost wrote:I would resub this to like DBH or threadless, somewhere that can do oversized off the shirt prints and have maybe one large tree coming up and the little owls a little bigger and on different branches. I think that would pop nicely, save you from doing roots, which I think would detract, and give you a really nice shirt!


Excellent points. I definitely will tweak this I think. I know it's running a little long across the top and it needs to move in a bit for Woot's printing.... I'm still new, so I forget things and then remember. Getting feedback from vets like you help a lot, everyone has been great.

grrlmarvel


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TheyKilledKenny wrote:The roots would help give the tree a greater sense of height... GMV


Yeah I thought so too. I really want to tweak this after the competition just for my own portfolio. Thanks for the support!

grrlmarvel


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sguthrie12 wrote:I like this. I like it a lot. I want to wear it now.


Wow. Thanks! *blushes*.

grrlmarvel


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prozakgal wrote:Man I love this one. I really want it... I want to wear it with everything I own...


Thank you so much... gosh, everyone has been so great to support my design.

TheyKilledKenny


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grrlmarvel wrote:Yeah I thought so too. I really want to tweak this after the competition just for my own portfolio. Thanks for the support!


Keep in mind, such a shirt may fit into a different genre in the future... Roots, animals, trees, nature, tall, perspective, etc...

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