Derby #200: The Silver Screen
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OZ NOIR

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colourcraze


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This is great stylistically! The art just needs a few tweaks imo. Her left arm is disproportionately small, especially her hand. and her right arm is coming from a weirdly low elbow. Also, it would help the stiffness if her feet were apart a little bit! like, with one back and more on the toe, if that makes sense. Think as if you were actually standing in front of a microphone and draw that Her face is really pretty btw, not trying to be down on your art, it's nice! just a few small changes that would make it perfecto!

qwasdfz


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Really hot drawing..._________...JK but seriously good job.

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