Derby #209: Fairy Tales

Intervention!

Unfortunately the joke only seems to be clear when there's text - non-incidental

Rejected because: Unfortunately the joke only seems to be clear when there's text - non-incidental

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walmazan


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I hope you like it!

mymovinman


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+1 Let's try this again!

kzero0


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I thought the text in question was the "Intervention" but you still got my vote! :D

csl312


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kzero0 wrote:I thought the text in question was the "Intervention" but you still got my vote! :D


Yea I thought the idea was the shirt doesn't work without the word intervention, which is probably why it was left in, but then I fear this will be rejected again.

walmazan


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csl312 wrote:Yea I thought the idea was the shirt doesn't work without the word intervention, which is probably why it was left in, but then I fear this will be rejected again.


UPS! I saw!, My bad english got me again! not ones, two times today

The god think its I think I know what need to do in case this got rejected again. Thanks

j5


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walmazan wrote:UPS! I saw!, My bad english got me again! not ones, two times today

The god think its I think I know what need to do in case this got rejected again. Thanks


Yes, put everything back but the banner.

move along

marulo99


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"Unfortunately the joke only seems to be clear when there's text - non-incidental"

Then I think the same should apply to the "Straw Sticks & Bricks BBQ" entry.

jshrop


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walmazan wrote:I hope you like it!


Damn, and this was the only design I got really excited about today!

jimmytime


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Aw man, rough time getting this one through

sykotek


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walmazan wrote:UPS! I saw!, My bad english got me again! not ones, two times today

The god think its I think I know what need to do in case this got rejected again. Thanks


I happen to be under the impression that it'll work without the banner, you should just remove it and resubmit it. Everyone may not get right away that it is an intervention, but there's no question that it's an awkward moment for the Wolf and that's what works for this image. Coincidentally, it also makes this shirt more kid friendly without it.

alexanderjd


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sykotek wrote:I happen to be under the impression that it'll work without the banner, you should just remove it and resubmit it. Everyone may not get right away that it is an intervention, but there's no question that it's an awkward moment for the Wolf and that's what works for this image. Coincidentally, it also makes this shirt more kid friendly without it.


Agree. I think it works better without the "intervention"

Let the viewer decide what uncomfortable situation is upon us. Intervention? Vengeance? Jilted ex-lovers.

alexanderjd


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alexanderjd wrote:Agree. I think it works better without the "intervention"

Let the viewer decide what uncomfortable situation is upon us. Intervention? Vengeance? Jilted ex-lovers.



As an aside .. I would consider changing the couch colors a bit. The red kinda blends with Ms. Hood's hood. Makes her a little difficult to identify.

gement


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Since the Powers that Be are being so strict on the definition of "incidental text" for this design, I hope they'll be cracking down on some of the other offenders that were still in the running last I looked...

gement


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gement wrote:Since the Powers that Be are being so strict on the definition of "incidental text" for this design, I hope they'll be cracking down on some of the other offenders that were still in the running last I looked...


Specifically, three of the Hansel and Gretel entries contain signs with fairly important text.

Lagbert


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This is a tragedy I really like how this design evolved from the first version in the preview thread. The surprised look on the wolves face and the anger/indignation of the other characters is spot on.

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