Derby #92: Steampunk

Push my buttons

I just don't think so.

Rejected because: I just don't think so.

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databit


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Re: Push my buttons


Needs more steam, brass and cow bells.

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melite


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Re: Push my buttons


I like this, just seems soft b/c the metal is a cream color.

Also, I'm not sure why there's steam coming out of the top. Just seems like extra crowding for me to help make the point, but I think if you colored it to look more metallic it might get the point across better.

Nice work and nice concept though!

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elwayman02


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oh great, another gaming reference. Getting old...

great art, but the concept could be more creative.

cobolisdead


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Re: Push my buttons


Awesome job! I like the Video Game reference! GMV!

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koronae


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Re: Push my buttons


:/ Even MORE gaming shirts? This derby is becoming a huge disappointment. I hope it shapes up tomorrow because uggh. I've seem maybe one shirt submitted so far that I'd consider wearing.

faultylogic83


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you have the support of me and my playstation,

Stormink


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A good concept, but the execution is not good enough in my opinion. Where's the gold trinkets? And the lines are too wonky. And the hatching doesn't really work, and it needs more depth through the use of more colors.

ShirtFight


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I think it's a great concept, and I like that you didn't make the lines super clean, gave it even more of that handmade steampunk look.

IamIreland


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Well, I like it, much more original than all these clockwork hearts we're seeing.

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