Derby #76: Beginning
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first day of school

first day of school
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speedcheetah


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in my opinion pond scum, amoeba, and paramecium really get a bad wrap. so, in this beginnings derby i decided to glorify the little guy, literally, and give him some much needed spotlight. in a way, you could consider this a PR campaign for pond scum everywhere.

what am i writing? anyway...first entry for this derby. i hope you like it. let me know what you think! :-D

BootsBoots


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Yep. Still cute. And the colors look great on the shirt.


speedcheetah


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BootsBoots wrote:Yep. Still cute. And the colors look great on the shirt.


thanks boots

madgab32928


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I love the colors of this shirt. IMO, there aren't many green shirts in the derbies.
This shirt made me smile.

eHalcyon


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I'm afraid your shirt comp looks oversaturated, such that it appears to be a green not offered by woot rather than the grass shirt you intended (judging by the design detail image). I suggest a resub...

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speedcheetah


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Not sure what I'd do... I took the color straight from woot's template. Thanks for the advice. I'll check to see why it is off...

eHalcyon


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speedcheetah wrote:Not sure what I'd do... I took the color straight from woot's template. Thanks for the advice. I'll check to see why it is off...


Well you've got the correct colour in your design detail image. It's just the comp that seems off.

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speedcheetah


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eHalcyon wrote:Well you've got the correct colour in your design detail image. It's just the comp that seems off.

I'm not really sure what's up. The PSD has the right color, but it is the comp as you said that seems off. Possibly it is because I was working with cmyk and saved it as rgb... I dunno.

eHalcyon


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speedcheetah wrote:I'm not really sure what's up. The PSD has the right color, but it is the comp as you said that seems off. Possibly it is because I was working with cmyk and saved it as rgb... I dunno.


That could screw it up. RGB always.

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sharpie23


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Love the colors... the splotches of red complement the green very nicely. The apple was a great suggestion... good job.

parrotworks


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This design is awesome. Sorry to see its not farther up the list.

narkus


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i love his bottom lip : )


thatrobert


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